Smart my friend, smart. There is a great idea... use it. haha. great ending for that idea also.

A great ending? Which is....???

How much people should there be that go to the tomb or whatever?

Haha, hell I think we're doing his assignment right now... oh well I'd like to see how this would turn out.

the ending where the people believe it is cursed by the devil but it is actually all in their heads and they are killing/going crazy on pure instienct(sp?)

I'd say about 5 people.

Andrew

No, I'm referring to AsiansBotToy's assignment. And yeah five people would work...

yeah i noticed that and deleted my comment lol

Andrew, What?? I may be a little slow,(like my teacher told me today), but I dont understand what your trying to say. Lmao. So, they kill people by pure instinct, and then realize that there is no Lucifer, or something??

Haha, its not really like an assignment, its more like a project without a grade.
Because i bought this book kit thing from my school for like 20 dollars, and i need to get it in by the 29th and if i turn it in later, they wont accept it.

I think it'd be based more on paranoia, you know, it's like going into a "haunted" house and every shadow becoming a ghost. Suspicion would asrise within the group, fear would come out of that, and then ultimately murder.
"Get him before he can get us."

okay okay here we go.

After find a lost tomb, five men discover it is more then a tomb. it is infact the place where lucifer has fallen. (as told by 'ancient scriptures and marking on the wallk and what not).

And the end the last man alive (after killings his best friend or whatever) discovers that he   did it all from his imagination. everything he has been doing and has seen was not real. they were all made up in his mind. that is a sign of him going crazy over the find.

Andrew

That could work, too.
And then for a real kicker have the "find" be a locked box, that once everyone is dead, he breaks open to discover - nothing.

And there he is trapped in this desert, no way out, and with just an empty box.

Oh okay, i think i get it now. So the killer(man) has hallucinations, about the killings, and stuff that took place, and after he killed everyone he snaps back into reality and notices it was all fake??
And the other 4 people he stalked and killed in his mind are all still alive at the end?

I think they'd be dead.

But like andrew said, it wasnt real, and was all in his head. So I'm guessing he should go crazy and actually kill them, and then snap back into reality?

He is imagining it all but he is really in a tomb and is really killing people.

So like at the end, have him wake up from sleep, or something? how can i let the readers know he was imagining it?