Quoted from DV44 I agree. I can't even look at myself in the mirror right now.

I'll just leave this here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HZa1jFSZV-s

Quoted from Demento I'll just leave this here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HZa1jFSZV-s

That's what I'm talking about.

Lee, good on you for just doing what you want to do, and writing what you want to write.
But... have you considered a little break?

Be careful not to burn yourself out.

A week away from the pen can make a massive difference.

Good luck, mate.

Lee... this could work, but only if you make it for kids... and, even then, it doesn't sound like blockbuster material to me. I could be totally wrong, of course.

Whenever you write something always consider the budget you are writing under and who your target market is.

Quoted from Scoob Lee, good on you for just doing what you want to do, and writing what you want to write. But... have you considered a little break? Be careful not to burn yourself out. A week away from the pen can make a massive difference. Good luck, mate.

I always take a week off after writing a script to recharge my batteries/plan the next one. After this, I'm taking 2 weeks off to plot/plan whatever comes next.  

And thanks, I am enjoying the heck out of this script at the moment. No way can I stop now as it's getting funnier and more exciting as it goes on.

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In all likelihood, the script won't be longer than 80-85 pages, so even if people don't find it "serious" it's short enough to read for fun, which is the intention.

Jeff asked me if this script was "serious", well, I'm putting effort into it and it's not intended to be a pi$$er by any means. It's just meant to be a fun script.

And a test, I suppose, to see if I can somehow pull off something "exceptional".

Quoted from DustinBowcot Lee... this could work, but only if you make it for kids... and, even then, it doesn't sound like blockbuster material to me. I could be totally wrong, of course. Whenever you write something always consider the budget you are writing under and who your target market is.

Synopsis' can be misleading. I merely condensed everything that happens to give a clearer representation. It's got quite a decent structure.

Classic 3 Act story, developed characters, exciting plot, interesting dynamic between the two leads, twists/turns/double-crosses, interesting antagonist, high stakes, etc.

I think anyone could see this movie. There are a few "PG-13" moments, some mild swearing (again PG-13) but it's really not got a target audience, anyone can see it.

All in all, it's like a James Bond movie if a James Bond movie married The Heat and they had a demented demon child.