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Don
Posted: July 16th, 2012, 7:52pm Report to Moderator
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The Twins by Jennifer Joelle Fatou - Comedy - These 2 guys have a problem most men wish they had:hot,young women just can't get enough of them.They run,hide,lie and deceive until of course they find then again - celtex, format


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This wouldn't open for me.  Just got a lot of random computer text.

Anyone else get the same problem?  It's in Celtex format, not sure if it's related...

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The guy has posted the actual CeltX file.

It will download and you can open it up in CeltX.

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Quoted from 5ambo
The guy has posted the actual CeltX file.

It will download and you can open it up in CeltX.



I think you'll find the guy is a girl 'Jennifer Joelle Fatou'.

It's easier to sumbit work as a PDF, especially as the option to do so is available in Celtx. This makes the file platform and device independent, meaning anyone can view any read it WITHOUT the need to download Celtx. I have Celtx on my iPhone, but it won't open files linked throught a browser platform.
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Quoted from Eoin

I think you'll find the guy is a girl 'Jennifer Joelle Fatou'.


Apologies Jennifer!  Thank you Eoin!  

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Baltis.
Posted: July 18th, 2012, 8:06pm Report to Moderator
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Without reading the script and only trying to observe what it is "should be" about -- I'd rewrite the log line into something more like the below mentioned...

"Two smooth talking womanizers have a problem most men only dream about, women can't get enough of 'em -- but when  their deceiving ways catch up to them, so do the women they've scorned."


If your story has nothing to do with this, think about a re-write.  I don't have celtex, and don't want it, so I probably won't be able to read your script until it's posted in PDF.  I wish you the best of luck with your writing though.
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