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He's A Dog by Cheryl Bealer-Wynton - Comedy - After he accidentally ingests his girlfriend's research project, Jim turns into a dog and finds he must use his canine abilities to keep her out of the clutches of another man. - html, format
Read the first few pages and I like it. Good dialogue and funny moments. My only suggestion is less parenthesis in dialogue. Actions would read better not in the dialogue but the story. I'm a dog guy too and thought your premise was funny. Good luck.
The premises is cute and I think it would make a good family comedy movie. For me it starts out a little too cliche but maybe that's what makes a good family film.
Like Chris said, you need to move most of your parenthesis into action lines.
The dialogue seems smooth and it flows nice, making it an easy read. I like that it gets right into the story of changing to a dog.