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Don
Posted: June 23rd, 2017, 12:36am Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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The Hemp Farm by David E. Foster - Comedy - {no logline} 95 pages - pdf, format

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Sorry - this one is a mess.


My Scripts can all be seen here:

http://dlambertson.wix.com/scripts
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PrussianMosby
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Yo, Dave's right.

I'm not a " user" anymore but your title per se imo is super attractive, especially with regards to that whole renaissance in case of the subject at the moment, with several countries legalizing and finding medical usage etc.

Point is

All that doesn't matter. You must serve a well-thought out selling line/ logline. Then your exact title must stand on the cover page, and then, there's FADE IN: , followed by story and nothing else...

Screenwriting has a definite formatting.

Anyway, as said, the general subject has lots of potential at the moment. So just decide for yourself if you care for a correct and professional presentation.

Best wishes



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LuisAnthony
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I agree with the two guys above, screenwriting isn't the place to experiment when it comes to formatting, you either have to get it right or it's not considered a screenplay.

I would also suggest to give us a logline. Scripts without one don't get as many reads.
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There doesn't appear to be any punctuation in the dialogue. Perhaps there was a glitch when exporting to PDF?
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It's a good title, but with agree with above comments about the formatting.

At the end of the script you put 'THE END ??' - or maybe that needs to be superimposed.


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