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RJ
Posted: November 26th, 2012, 10:00pm Report to Moderator
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Chris,

Thanks for checking this out and for your kind words.

I agree - the way the exposition is with Eric defenitely needs fixing.

Just out of interest: did you read past page ten? I assume with your review that you left it at page ten - which is completely fine, I'm just interested.

Thanks again. Any feedback is always good.

Renee
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Hi Renee, I'm planning to read some more, it's a great script despite the flaws.  I just decided to stop there for now but I have this script as one of those that I plan to read all of because it's good.
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RJ
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Chris,

Sorry, I missed your reply.

Thanks. I'm excited to know that fresh eyes are taking a look - I've asked the same people previously to read this over and over and I've very much appreciated their help

Hopefully now it lives up to expectations

Let me know if I can return the read. As I've stated previously though, I may not get to it for a little while, but I will eventually - busy time of year and all.

Renee
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No problem Renee, I'll let you know what I think when I finish reading it.

I haven't posted anything on here as yet, I get a lot of writers block lol but I hope to have something up here soon.  Reading scripts like yours inspire me.

- Chris.
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