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The primary purpose of the SimplyScripts Discussion Board is the discussion of unproduced screenplays. If you are a producer or director lookng for your next project, the works here are available for option, purchase or production only if you receive permission from the author.
NOTE: these screenplays are NOT in the public domain and MAY NOT be used or reproduced for any purpose (including eductional purposes) without the expressedwrittenpermission of the author.
The Life Story of Tom Park by Raymond Mack - Drama - When Thomas Anderson Park, an average high school teenager from Los Angeles, California, meets a troublemaker that leads his life into the peer pressures of sexual desire and drug addiction. When Thomas has enough of it, he falls in love with a girl named Jessica, who may led him back to the right direction before their graduation. - pdf, format
You need to brush up on basic grammar and spelling before you expect other people to read this.
By the first page I was regretting opening your script. I see the image you're trying to paint, but it's like looking through muddy, feces laden, stagnant water.
There's a story here, but I'm not touching it with a ten foot pole. At least not until I make sure my shots are up to date.
If you'd like to know the details, please reply and I'll let you know what I saw.