The Affection by Trevor Mabasa - Drama - Mechanic Engineering student put on the test when he rekindle the childhood friendship thatturned to be a hard hitting romance with a ballet dancer that got very dangerous when the ballet dancer former high school boyfriend turns to be the affection of the dangerous exploits haunting them. 123 pages - pdf format

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Trevor, I would not recommend putting an entire script in bold font.

the way you describe things is terrible and awesome at the same time.

"it’s whitey as in it’s cold and it has got fog on it."

No idea what that means.

I'm the best you've never seen😂😂😂

i suggest getting a translator next time

I suffered through three pages and stopped reading.  First, get rid of the "bold font" through-out the script.  Second, your grammar and use of words is a grammar nightmare.  This needs to be re-written correctly.  Not impressed with this script at all.

Hi Trevor

Reading your log line - I did not read further. Go with the good advice given above.

PS: MABASA, You South African?

i kind of want to finish reading this

"I agree. Why are you two acting like Rabbits?"

LOL. This could be the The Room 2.0.

Thanks man. Let me know how was your reading.

...We like carrots?