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Posted: February 17th, 2018, 6:15pm Report to Moderator

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That was fast! Thanks a lot for the read.

This is my first feature but I've written a couple of tv spec scripts before.

Good point about making the time period clear. It's information i took for granted so I'll make it clearer.

I'm sure this is the same with most people's feedback but the things that have been brought up aren't really a surprise to me.
I've always felt i needed to focus more on the actual building of the ship and to get Amy and Ian more involved and bring something individual to the table. In my early outlines, each kid had a special skill but i remember watching films like that as a kid and getting bummed out because i didn't have any skills and nothing to offer a team. No computer hacking skills or nunchuck skills. So i decided to have teamwork as the only skill required. I know, pretty deep, right?
I need to take an in depth look at the secondary characters.

Maybe it shows but i did take a few chunks out of the ending and i'm glad you brought up the speed at which it ends. I'll take a look at it.

Thanks again for your time and your notes.

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Posted: February 17th, 2018, 6:20pm Report to Moderator

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Thanks Frank. That's actually really interesting. I might put that in somehow.

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