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Hey everyone, I have a new Western spec that's just been uploaded and I'd like to get some eyes on it. I'm down to read any feature length script or a collection of shorts in exchange, thanks!

Here's the link to the script: https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-western/m-1557846985/s-new/

I punched up some dialogue and such in a newer draft which I'll probably send over if you want to review it.

Logline: A young Chinese girl, accompanied by an older, cynical cowboy, goes out on an adventure to find her father and take him away from the rough working conditions of railroad construction

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