I'm currently making a few changes to the script, but even this is a good draft. Would love it if someone can give it a read and give me feedback. I'm willing to do the same in return. I know it's a little long, with 126 pages, but I'm ready to read two of your scripts in return to make up for that
Ali by Hasan Malik - Drama - A Pakistani mixed martial artist moves to America after a brutal tragedy. He meets a girl who helps him rebuild his life and his ability to love in the process. 126 pages
DM me and I'll send you the script.
It's posted in the drama section too.