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BarryJohn
Posted: May 2nd, 2020, 3:08am Report to Moderator
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Hi all...

I'm looking to do a read exchange on my script. I've spent the last 6 months re-writing.. re-writing it and am looking for constructive reviews. I'll be happy to read yours. Any Genre but comedy. My script can be found here on SS In FEATURE - DRAMA (page 2 I think) Or email me and I'll PDF it to you; opm7bjt@gmail.com  
TITLE:     THE BOOK OF JOSEPH
GENRA:   Suspense drama
PAGES:   89
LOG LINE: The battle for souls - rule of earth, will not be fought by the Gods in heaven or in hell.. But, here on earth, between a Priest and a child.

Link to script: https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1558188388/
  


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MGayles
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I can read this if you read my script "Blood Money" in the drama section.
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BarryJohn
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Hi, MGayles.

You on.. I'll give yours a read.
We to be blunt honist in constructive criticism.

Barry John  


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i just now got this. I'm gonna read your script tonight.
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BarryJohn
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Cool. I'm finishing off a script and should get to yours day after tomorrow.


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Hi I’ll read both of yours if you both review my screenplay - scapegoat guilty in the drama section - let’s all make a promise of a 10 page review each including sections like dialog, storyline, characters etc? We can make this productive I’ll read yours first barry

The link to Billy J's script:
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-dramedy/m-1596657322/s-new/



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