Just read the script.  Mostly agree with what everyone had to say.

It felt like one person wrote the first 8 page and somebody else wrote the rest.  The first 8 pages feel like natural conversation me and my friends have(I think everyone has had a conversation like this at one time or another).  But about halfway through page 7 it starts to turn into on the nose-expositional-nobody would ever say this-Scooby Doo talk(thanks to whoever mentioned Scooby Doo before because I was thinking of a show where this was eveident).

But that's not to say it wasn't funny.  I mean, the first line made me laugh.  I think it's the fact that you picked the supermodel with the hardest name to pronounce to be the zombie.

To be honest, the only reason I read this was because of the little note that said it was obscene.  I wish it wasn't there because it built it up too much and I was expecting some seriously messed up stuff, and I was disappointed...but then again, if it wasn't up there, I probably wouldn't of read the script(and enjoyed it).

Part of me would of preffered if they just remained there and talked because I enjoyed their banter so much.  I've never heard a stoner use the word "disposition" though.  That made me laugh.

Great job.  Good script.  I had fun reading it.