Quoted from Gum Unleeeeeeess… the demon assumed the identity of the old woman, killed her son, went to Hollywood, and was cast as the Grandma in the diner scene in that movie ‘Legion’?

Hahaha! Loved that scene!

Talk about a lazy logline, ha. I’m not mad at ya.

I like the episode you’re drawing inspiration from. Haven’t seen it in ages, but I’m excited to see which direction you take it.

COTTAGE HOUSE feels redundant.

Cool opening scene. Feels extremely familiar to something else I’ve watched recently. Can’t put my finger on it. Wasn’t the Twilight Zone.

Feel like a bit of this dialogue can be streamlined. Not a big problem, but a sentence like “The jensens who live about a mile down the road have gone missin’.” Can just as easily be “The Jensens down the road have gone missin’.”

Bill is the monster, right?

Oh ok, there was a twist on what seemed like the obvious twist.

Pretty good. Feels like a re-write. I swear I recently saw or read something very similar like this except it was 2 kids instead of an old woman. May have been a cartoon? I don’t know why this story seemed so familiar – like almost to a T – to whatever it is I’m thinking of.

BTW, I think that title could be improved, but that’s a nitpick.