LOL, this is hilarious! I'm not mad about the log line as it reads like some kind of anti-religious slogan but I'm glad I started reading.
I know nothing about a format of a play so I can't comment on that.
I've read 13 pages and enjoyed the subtle humor, the reverend versus laptop is just so funny!
A typo at the top of the page 8 - HIRE should be HIDE.
I'm hoping to be able to read more later on,