Elis,

I agree with you and as a mother of three I can tell you that I'm a big supporter of young people. They are our future!

However, these boards, when not moderated tend to get overrun by comments/ideas/opinions by exhuberant young people that don't really add much of value and as a result some older and serious writers tend to leave. We need both young people and older experienced writers. The rules are there for a reason, even though they might seem strict at times.

Pia

I agree we live in a world or rules and regulations. I was just giving the kid a pat on the back. I thought he needed a little bit of encouragement. Don't like to dampen any enthusiastic heart.
I am also a mother of three, lol.  

Quoted from elis Ghostrider is only 14. Starting at this age and asking so many questions will give him , if he sticks it out, a great start in scriptwriting. I applaud him for joining this site and asking so many questions.

Agreed.  When you're trying to learn, there's no such thing as a stupid question.

Quoted from Lon Agreed.  When you're trying to learn, there's no such thing as a stupid question.

My 8th grade science teacher had a similar philosophy.

The first few weeks anyway.

I made a cynic out of him, I think.

Quoted from elis Ghostrider is only 14. Starting at this age and asking so many questions will give him , if he sticks it out, a great start in scriptwriting. I applaud him for joining this site and asking so many questions.

At his age, the first thing he will have to learn is how to take criticism.  If he gets defensive after the first negative comment, he won't stick around.



Phil

Dogglebee, what do you mean by defensive,

and I thank everyone who gave me good advice and helping me out.

Quoted from Ghostrider Dogglebee, what do you mean by defensive, and I thank everyone who gave me good advice and helping me out.

A lot of times, I'll comment on poor character development in a script.  Or how the story dragged.  Or it was unrealistic.  One of a thousand things that can go wrong with a script.  And, instead of saying , 'thanks, I'll look into it,' I'll get a reply like (these are direct quotes):

"Ignore Phil's rampant cynicism. The rest of us do."


"The first twenty episodes of Banana Chan tell the most epic tragedy about unrequited love which anyone has ever written in the history of literature.  You sir are an idiot."


"dogglebe, dont be jealous that you didnt come up with the idea first. We all know that u havent had any big writing credits that people have  had a fit over like Welsey has had with his 2 series. So if you want to bash anyone on their writing, do it to your self and some of your bad writing."


"I came to you for your opinion cuz You seem to be respected around here and you have shorts made/so maybe you are doing something right. But i just s feel a negative vibe which comes from you toward me. Which can we seen in your 1st response on ppage one. I just thought I was a rookie writer and what you had say was better then I knew at the time.

As time went  on, I have learned alot of things. And your respectful opinion is no longer admired by me."


If your script is good, I'll tell you that.  If your script is bad, I'll tell you that.  Either way, I'll explain why.  Just don't come to Simply Scripts and automatically assume we're gonna love your work.  This isn't a back-patting society.


Phil

I love praise as much as the next gal, but like the successful comedian said "you can have a room of 500 people laughing at your jokes, but it's the guy in the corner not laughing that gets to you".

Just like that, I enjoy praise, but in my rewrites, I tend to reread the negative comments the most...

Phil,

your reviews may be short and some may see them as negative, but in my experience, your comments have always been truthful and therefore helpful.

And yeah, I work on too much at the same time......and I'm not getting anywhere.

Pia,

Don't say you're not getting anywhere.  It may "seem" that way, but this is a negative statement that attracts negative.  I know it sounds mystical and all, but it's true.

Let me tell you a little story.

There is a lady I know who is extremely prolific and she's all over the map when it comes to writing and too, very successful and a lot more experienced than I am.  One day, (sounds like a fairy tale I know) I happened to come across one of her posts at a time when I was struggling. (These times I accept just as I accept seasons or any other cycle you can think of.)

Now a lot was contained in the post.  I don't remember all of the details, but suffice it to say she is a remarkable woman not only in the creative aspect, but also in the business aspect of writing.  I became amazed and inspired by all that she was/is doing: how MUCH she was writing--sometimes as much as 10,000 words in a day or so and yes, she obviously does rewrites; it's not instant gold, but this made me realize that even when I "feel" that I'm at a standstill, I too can raise my level of quality production.

When I read this lady's work, I realized that yes, even if I have a bad month or two or even three, I could come back and write 10,000 words in a day too, and repeat it the day after and the day after.

There was one contest I entered in the spring where I received excellent reviews from around nine judges and do you know, I almost never entered the contest.  Why?  Because I only had ten days to finish the contest which I'd only just discovered and it had been going on for a couple of months.

So, just because things don't "seem" to be moving along.  It doesn't mean they aren't.    You never "see" flowers bloom unless you use still motion photography.

You are getting somewhere, you just may not "see" it.

Blessings,
Sandra

Quoted from dogglebe "dogglebe, dont be jealous that you didnt come up with the idea first. We all know that u havent had any big writing credits that people have  had a fit over like Welsey has had with his 2 series. So if you want to bash anyone on their writing, do it to your self and some of your bad writing." Phil

I was mentioned by someone... Awesome. The funny part is that I get like 2 reads a year so that would be a misinformed comment.

And I'm not sure why that comment about him being 14 had my comment quoted. I delete ideas in progress off the WIP board, yes but this is where questions go.

I'm not sure what question is in question here but most of what I have deleted were ideas and not questions. Ideas in Progress are what you discuss with your pals in chat.

Ghostrider,

At your age, you've got a jump on just about all of us.  My wife and I try to offset comedies with thrillers, and more often than not, we have at least 2 irons in the fire.  It helps, however, if one of the scripts we're working on is a rewrite vs. a first draft.  You might find that multiple projects helps keep the energy flowing; and one often feeds into the other.  When you work on one project, if you get stuck, you're stuck.

For now, I would learn the craft as best you can, and complete your first screenplay.  But at the same time, read as many scripts as you can.  It's amazing what can be achieved by osmosis alone.

Cheers,

Tony

I tried it once, about ten years ago.  It was a novel and a screenplay at the same time.  I had no problem keeping the stories straight, which was helpful since I was in both a novel and screenwriting class.  The good news is that people seemed to like both stories.  The bad news?  The novel read like a script and the script read like a novel.

Oh well.