Hi Brymo,

My first question was, how much research did you put into this?  Then I read that these were thoughts that popped into your head from observations.

Anyway, it was a good script, the ending was good.  But the S&M seemed kinda tame.  Not much went on, a few cracks here and there.  But nothing really happened.

Maybe you could do a sequel and drive this up a few gears.  Let Molly add more material so much so to put Frank off the S&M scene and maybe Molly will get her wish after all.

Also, your title has Miss Molly and you start off with A WOMAN.  Why?  We already know her name.

All the best,


Javier