If it was Grims, then I'm even more confused.  Why was his skull there?  What happened to him?  The old lady's limbless torso is inside,a dn Grim's skull is outside?  What am I missing here?

Sorry -- I did give it a shot and only got 2 pages in. Yes, I agree, many typos and bad formatting. This really makes it very difficult to read.

The story did not catch my attention and I waned. It might have potential and really needs some serious thought and planning.

I use celtx which from what "spencerforhire" says is not a good program. I use that program to write my scripts. Dreamscale, your questions i rather not answer. I know that i should re-write the script and those questions will be answered to a degree. It really grinds my gears that the program i been using for sometime now isn't good at what it
s suppose to be at .Granted it's a free program,but still.