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CoopBazinga
Posted: December 1st, 2011, 10:58am Report to Moderator
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Another masterpiece from Josh Bushman. The gay (has to be gay) nazi doing a French impression is my highlight from this little bundle of joy. Keep em coming!

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Quoted from leitskev
Josh, you gotta do some research for period pieces. Willy Wonka was not written until 1964, the film in 1971. So the guys can't joke about it in 1945.

Best of luck, happy Thanksgiving!


Very true, but the book Charlie and the Chocolate Factory takes place in the 1920's, the time period in which the author Roald Dahl was a child. So in a weird way the three nazi buddies could of known about dah Willy Wonka and dah Chocolate factory. After all that fictional event took place over twenty years before their time.

Have a merry X-MAS!


Here are some of my scripts, check them out if you dare.

Damn You Bruce!  

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/DAMNYOUBRUCEnnn.pdf

15 page version with fixed formatting available upon request.

3 Nazi's in a Foxhole

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/3NazisinaFoxhole.pdf

Shopping at Save Mart

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/ShoppingatSaveMart.p
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JoshuaBman
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?.....p;feature=plpp_video

If you liked the script you'll love the film!
Cheers,
Josh B.


Here are some of my scripts, check them out if you dare.

Damn You Bruce!  

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/DAMNYOUBRUCEnnn.pdf

15 page version with fixed formatting available upon request.

3 Nazi's in a Foxhole

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/3NazisinaFoxhole.pdf

Shopping at Save Mart

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/ShoppingatSaveMart.p
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albinopenguin
Posted: December 2nd, 2011, 2:43am Report to Moderator
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2:12....that's where I stopped.


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mcornetto
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How funny.  I made it exactly that far as well.  I almost left a bit earlier.   That was pretty bad Josh (pretty good views though).

You probably had lots of fun doing it and I think that counts.  Here's my comments for what it's worth.  

The acting was atrocious.  The best out of the bunch was the blonde haired Hitler lover.   Rehearse so everyone feels comfortable with the material, then rehearse some more.  You guys aren't professionals who've done this a bunch of times - you can't wing it.  Practice the accents and the timing.  

The script is a bit uneven and the acting makes that more apparent.  If you had a tip top script even bad acting wouldn't ruin it.

But I think the hardest part to watch was whatever filter you decided to wash the video with.  If it was supposed to be a security camera, it didn't look the part.  If you did it because the costumes you were wearing didn't look right in colour,   then it was the wrong choice - plain black and white would have been better.

Another area that needs improvement for you is editing. A lot of those cuts didn't come across as smooth.

Anyway, keep at it and you'll eventually get it.  
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leitskev
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lol! Ok, Josh, I'm sold. I watched a little. At least you guys are having fun.
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Yeah I shot that flick almost 7 years ago and that was before I went to video school. If anybody wants to really 'low blow me' have a look at my newest work. Just go to YouTube and type JoshuaBman in the search section. Thanks to all that loved or hated 3 Nazi's.
Cheers
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Here are some of my scripts, check them out if you dare.

Damn You Bruce!  

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/DAMNYOUBRUCEnnn.pdf

15 page version with fixed formatting available upon request.

3 Nazi's in a Foxhole

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/3NazisinaFoxhole.pdf

Shopping at Save Mart

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/ShoppingatSaveMart.p
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Um, I'm willing to bet that this one is a piss-take.  But it does make me want to (briefly) read "Bruce"...
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Conz
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holy crap, this is on film?!?!


I'd list my "work" here, but I don't know how to hyperlink.  

"Career" Highlights
-2, count em, 2 credits on my IMDB page.  
-One time a fairly prominent producer e-mailed me back.  
-I have made more than $1000 with my writing!
-I've won 2 mugs... and a thong.  (polaroids of me in thong available for $10 through PM)

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shane
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Am I the only one who read this in the voices of Hans and Franz from SNL?
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Quoted from Conz
holy crap, this is on film?!?!


when you have your own camera, you can film anything you want.


Phil

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