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And my ex, she was b*tching, shouting at me and stuffs. It wasn't in public, though. It was in our room. We were fighting over something I don't remember. We fought over a lot of things. Lolz... That girl really knew how to push your button. I almost slap her but I'm not that kind of guy. There's no way I'd get myself in trouble for hitting a girl. I think she meant for me to lay a hand on her so, she can sue me over. Then BAM! She get spitted in the face in stead and left the room, crying. Not long after then, we broke up. Yes! This happened in the states a few years ago.
They say there's a time and place for everything, but seriously man, that's the sort of thing that I go NATO at hearing. Spitting in someone's face is disrespectful and just plain disgusting. And to think I thought your threats weren't serious!! And I can't just ignore the fact that you spat in a woman's face!! That... Pisses... me... off...
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Quoted from Dreamscale
W...T...F?
Dude...easy, bro. What fucking country are you from? You're butchering the English language.
Well, that's just obvious! I was wondering if you even read your own words. You're literally "butchering" it yourself by asking people where they're from with an F word upfront their country.
For a moment there, I thought you were kool guy. The first comment seemed nice and cozy, then BAM! jumped in and tossed a nonsense comment. Take a look at your avatar there, if you're gonna put up a real pic of yourself, upload the one with your face, not your back head and tell people that's your real hair. That's just plain stupid!
"--butchering english language" <<< is that even a word?
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Coop... Cooper... My man, <<< lol to that.
Why am I not surprised! You just popped right in when somebody's trying to make a "drama" in my scripts' threads. You really have a thing about me, do you, Coop. What I did do?... Oh right, I commented on your script and called it a "blond joke." That offends you a little. But look at the bright side, it sounds more as a compliment than a criticism. It's a good thing that you can turn a short joke into a script, isn't it? Not everybody can do that. I can't do that... Well, maybe I can. lmao... But I'd prefer having my brain generates the story by itsself. We all have different talents, do we? Some people need a copied key to unlock the door while others already have one in their hands.
"--the most disgusting and offensive things--" Exactly! If the person didn't "disgust" me with his/her actions, none of that'd happened. Sic?
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If this is indeed the case, I have on idea why Dan is still talking to you let alone leaving you feedback. He's a better and more bland person than me, put it that way.
I think I have an idea, you support Dan then, BAM! Dan jumps in and support you back. Ain't that something? Good teammates, eh? Thumb up! for both of you. You see Coop, some people just can't do the "kiss-azz" thing. It's not that they don't want to do, the fact is that, they just can't.
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As for the script, I've read it but it didn't do a lot for me. Just not my thing at all I'm afraid.
You don't give up, do you? Trying to trash people's scripts by tossing around the same all the time? Don't you get tired of using them? It gets very old to me once I realize that it's been used twice over my scripts' threads. My advice is, you do need a new words to do it with. When an american said, "it's getting old" or "it gets old" which means it gets very annoying and if you still persue to using them, you'll end up... most likely to "disgust" them. Now I don't have to say what would happen after you disgust them, do I? If I could, Coop, I would tell you in "your face" to stay away from my scripts. I don't need people like to get anywhere near my script, per se. Simon was right, there ARE script-trashers running around the site. Fear-1, people like Ozz Rudd. Fear-2, script-trashers.
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P.S Simon's surname is still spelled wrong.
You're kinda slow, are you, Coop? Maybe try to expend your POV a little wider next time before jump into a conclusion. I submitted the script before Simon told me about the spelling.
Just a doubt beyond all of these, how does it feel playing the bad guy(bad cop)? Yes! I do mean refer it to, "good cop, bad cop" routine.
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They say there's a time and place for everything, but seriously man, that's the sort of thing that I go NATO at hearing. Spitting in someone's face is disrespectful and just plain disgusting. And to think I thought your threats weren't serious!! And I can't just ignore the fact that you spat in a woman's face!! That... Pisses... me... off...
Dan, lil dan... danny boy, <<< lolz...
You were serious, right? When you told me you're 17yr-old... I'm in my 20s. But to me, you're just a kid. You've got a talent of writing scripts, how kool is that! When I was a teen, I'd never thought of all these writing things. None... Zero. I was busy being kool, racing motorcycle, and hung out a lot, wooing beautiful-hot girls and stuffs. Well, beside the motorcycle race, I think I still am. lmao... Can't argue with the part "beautiful-hot girls," I admid.
Now let's talk lolz... the bove was just a warm up.
I see you defend the fact that I spitted in my ex's face. But think again Dan, do you care "why" I did that? Do you know the whole story behide that spit? If you throw a word, "I dont' care" then I'll assume you're ignorant. Ignorant people are careless. One wierd thing about me Dan, I don't talk to ignorant(s). Wait, I don't think that wierd. Let's scratch that. BAM! Scratched.
But if you do care, let me whisper you onething... a loud whisper, I supposed lolz... this "onething" it may or may not change "the fact that" you're still gonna defend but give yourself a chance to listen, aye? So, this one among more things that caused me to do what I did. Let me repeat, "one among others." there was once, lil Dan... she had a knife in her hand and trying to stab me in the neck. If I hadn't block with a hand, I'd ended up in an obituary page of the papers or in the headline news of any news station. It left me a few scars on my hand, left hand to be precised. And if you're doubted that I made that up, I have a proof that I did call 911 when it happened, "while it was happening." I'm sure thay have it recorded as an evidence. No, it didn't happen at the time when I spat at her. It was either a few weeks or a few months before. So Dan, still interest in persuing on my personal info? Be my guest, lil bro.
You see Dan, there was a cause before the effect. Do not jump right into a conclusion and judge before knowing it all. And I tell you this, I've never regretted that I did. She deserved it, fairly. Yes, there was a reason that she had that knife in hand poking toward my neck. But I'm not gonna say it because I don't think it matters. All I can say is that, she admitted it later after she found out the truth.
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Good bye.
This farewell you tossed at me, not a diddly shiit. Not one bit effect me, None... Zero! Don't flattered youself now Dan. I didn't tell you all of the above for trying to get you thrown away the "good bye" and turn around. No! I told you for one reason and only, you're just a kid. And I never mind kid. But you still have your choices, you can grant your own word and keep walking away or you can still stick around and toss a few words here and there on my script(s). It's up to you.
One more thing, though... you think I give a shiit about those few who's known as "contribute members" in SS? I don't. If they want to stick their hands in my scripts and willing to discuss and help with the issues, they're always welcome. But if they think about trashing my scripts, I don't want them get anywhere near my scripts. Hear this last thing, I will just not spit in their faces, I will shhart in it.
I think lil' Jimmy is on his way out...at least I hope he is.
I don't think I've ever seen such abuse of the English language. It's funny as shit, but sad at the same time. Maybe that scar on your left hand is causing some of the errors...who knows.
OK, Jimbo, you may indeed be all the way up in your 20's, but I think it's obvious you need to go home to Mommy and Daddy for a good old fashioned whipping and well they're at it, maybe they can wash that disgusting mouth out with Lava soap.
Jimmy, you really need to take a step back and examine what's going on here.
From the very beginning you were defensive about your scripts. If anyone said they were good (and let's be honest now, very few actually did) you were ecstatic, but if you ever got criticism, they were "wrong" and you always had a rebuttal for it.
If someone didn't like your script, you lashed out at them.
On your "Visit" thread (with over half your posts being on that thread alone) you made some pointless comment about how your cousins are trying to steal your script or something.
Now, on this thread, you go off on a rant about doing a very disgusting act - spitting on people?
You've only posted on three or four scripts that aren't your own. You lash out at some of the most respected members of the board. And worst of all, your scripts aren't even that great but you assume we're all your "fans".
Tell me Jimmy, what do you contribute to this board? I've tried to hold my tongue for a while now, but when it's so hard to get through your scripts when you don't have the assistance of Simon, and you still manage to insult GOOD WRITERS by saying that they're high or mentally deficient.
I have to give you this, though: your posts are the most hilarious thing I've read on this site in quite a while. Sadly, that's unintentional.
Now, I bet if you took a break and cooled down, things could fix themselves. Take a break. Don't post on the boards for awhile. Come back in a few days and say you're sorry, and maybe these folks will forgive you.
Alternatively, you could do the predictable thing and quote my post, followed by a lengthy series of half-cooked insults. What the hell, call me "retarded" and spit at your monitor, pretending its my face. I don't care.
My last comment before I leave you the hell alone...
Don't ever underestimate people because of their age. You only have to watch the olympics to find people my age winning gold medals.
Yes, I am a kid and yes I still have a heap to learn, but I sure as hell wouldn't dream of questioning anybody on SS. I owe a lot to these people. That is why I jumped to Coops defense. And that's why I would jump to anyones defense.
My last comment before I leave you the hell alone...
Don't ever underestimate people because of their age. You only have to watch the olympics to find people my age winning gold medals.
Yes, I am a kid and yes I still have a heap to learn, but I sure as hell wouldn't dream of questioning anybody on SS. I owe a lot to these people. That is why I jumped to Coops defense. And that's why I would jump to anyones defense.
Grow up.
To be fair, and I haven't done too much reading up on this thread -- I think he kind of gave you a complement.
He said, in a round about way, when he was your age he didn't have the dedication to writing as you do. He then said he was off being cool, riding bikes, pickin' up women and other triple A awesome things and that he didn't have the desire or passion for writing that you "seem" to have.
Can't get more complimentary than that, man. I think everyone needs to back up, breath and stop bickering here to be honest. Maybe Bert should come in and lock the thread and allow heated heads a cool down period.
--And worst of all, your scripts aren't even that great but you assume we're all your "fans".
Of all the bla... I can only hear this part a bit clearier so, 'm just gonna quoted over it.
I do think all of the readers who read my scripts as its fans. But I particularly appointed only to those who have read them and liked them. So, not everyone, "only the one that like them." If you don't really like it, and you don't really want to be called a "fan," don't worry, I can assure you that I have no intention of forcing you or anyone to be.
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--abuse of the English language.
All of the bla... only the above...
I seriously think that you are trying to cause something here. You keep saying I abuse the language. Which part particularly? All of them? Or only the part that I said I spat in someone's face? What are you-- a language analysis? Becareful when you attemp to accuse someone with something, make sure you have enough proof to accuse him with.
You're sounded different from others in here. They only focus on the part that I spat in people's faces. But you're trying to veer this thing into a different road or trying to cause the issue bigger.
If any of you here who really think of yourself a good person, you don't try to cause the problem bigger but to make it smaller and vanish. Try to be a problem solve, not to be a trouble-maker. Be the trouble-maker in your own script. Like I am
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This guy is a troll. Probably someone who got banned. Keep that in mind before feeding it.
Who is this nerdy looking lil guy...
greg! Hi there, Howho are you? how/who are you? lolz... I dno't really get what you are trying to refer to. Let just make the assumption, savvy? If you suspect me of a previous user got banned from the site, I raise my hand and honestly say, I am not. So, you're calling me name, huh? You sound really cute when you say, "this guy is a troll," I meant it. Know what happen when I read it? I shaked my head and chuckled, hilariously. Try to make a high-pitch voice with the words, "This guy is a troll." You'll see what I meant.
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Guy spitting in people's faces...MACHO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Angry Bear,
Hi!
I finally got your attention, huh? Thanks for being here. Love those glasses. And the way you wear it with that smile? Wow...
So, what sport do you play? Do you play pingpong? Tennis-table, I mean. One of the sport that get me sweat real fast but tireless.
So, where are you from? The swamp...? So, you live closed to a lake? a pond? Bet the view gives you a lot of freshing ideas to write. I am writing the Visit 2.0, if you have read the thread in the Visit, you'll know what I meant. I have a scene about the pond in the back of the cabin. I'm sure the idea of the pond or lake would easily get into the action for you when you write. I did the research and busting my own azz, excuse the language, just trying to express my words... I couldn't really describe it well enough even for myself to hear it that clear, was hoping you would give a damn to read and help me with the part. Or if you want the whole thing, I'd love you to have it.
Don't ever underestimate people because of their age. You only have to watch the olympics to find people my age winning gold medals.
Yes, many of the Olympic athletes are teens and they've been practicing for their entire life. Have you been writing since you were 3 or 4 years old? No, you haven't, so stop comparing yourself to them. I don't know you, but I know that you're not a gold medal winning screenwriter. Because that isn't an Olympic sport.
Bert, I think it's time for this thread to be locked and maybe a few people suspended.
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I have changed my mind about releasing Tommy2(Lelia). In return, I'll only release its one page Synopsis. This Syn will be a lot of secrets to be unlocked unless you have read the script.
I might have it released later but I want to see how all 3pcs work out together after I finish the 3rd piece. Yes! Tommy3(The Pact). It's still a work in progress.
I'm shifting between 3 scripts now. The Connection Part 1, Tommy3 and another one about the war. So, it'll take awhile.
Thanks for your support. If you think you do. Lolz...