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Don
Posted: December 11th, 2019, 3:59pm
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An Unexpected Party by William David Glenn IV - Short, Comedy - A low level businessman just wants to relax after a hard week of work, but is interrupted by his rowdy neighbors who take over his apartment and force him to plot to end the party and his nightmare. 8 pages - pdf format
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Posted: December 16th, 2019, 2:22pm
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I don't think you need the CUT TO: or JUMP CUT TO: and I think you meant to say the the coffee table "wobbled" instead of "waddled" but other than that, I liked it. A lot! Chuckled throughout and laughed out loud at the Chef in full chef's regalia!
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Nicely written, the ultimate party from hell out of nothing. I liked the nth degree stuff like the chef appearing, I think you could juice up the humor by adding a few more crazy elements like this in.
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Nice one, congratulations!
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