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Don
Posted: October 15th, 2020, 1:28pm Report to Moderator
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Are You Looking After Yourself? by Ben Clifford - Short, Drama - After feeling his wife has checked out mentally, a young father bonds with a widower in his neighborhood over a shared sense of loss. 18 pages - pdf format

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hey Ben.

Well written, for all the dialog that was short and to the point. The story read well and I could see it leading to something... I just didn't get the something / end? JOHN - I want to tell you about something - this dream I keep having. --What did I miss?


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Thanks for reading Barry.

Not sure what you mean with the ending - there's not much to get. He's describing the dream that he talks about in the opening.


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Got it Thanks Ben.


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