Unappealing by Ujah Clement - Short, Drama - The story is about a big difference between a certain man and his in-laws which has been tearing them apart. They have so much to gain if they can get along. But for that to happen one party must compromise. 15 pages - pdf format

New writer interested in feedback on this work, please be nice

Hi Ujah! Are you on the boards?

Is this a script for a film or a play? If for a film, have a look at this example for a film script, and take note of how it looks: https://amazonstudiosguilds.co.....Approval_Edited2.pdf .

Just a random script for a real film I got off the front page of SS, don't pay attention the content or plot. It looks different from the script you've written, because it's written in the typical format for a film script. This link (https://www.studiobinder.com/blog/how-to-write-a-screenplay/) talks about the typical feature film script. Don't worry too much about font types/sizes, margins, etc, because you can get free software that formats the script for you in that sense. I use Writerduet https://www.writerduet.com/

Here's what you do:

- Read a bunch of scripts that interest you, maybe scripts for movies you've seen and liked, and pay attention to their language and grammar, how they express things
- Download the software and trying to write something conforming to that language, format, grammar (like I said it's much easier with the software, don't use a word processor, it just won't work).
- Repeat again until you produce something you feel is ready for other eyes on it.

Thanks for posting! Hope I helped.