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Posted: October 15th, 2023, 2:54pm Report to Moderator

So, what are you writing?

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Lifeblood by Lono - Short, Family, Animation - After struggling to find acceptance a bee and a flower form a friendship, but can it stand the test of time? 4 pages - pdf format

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Posted: November 20th, 2023, 10:02pm Report to Moderator

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Hi Lono.

Cute! I enjoyed the imagery and this would make a great little animation. A good balance of humour, fun and a little sadness. No dialogue as none is required, you have put a lot of emotions into your 4 page piece. Well done.

Found one typo (AUTMUNM)

Good luck !

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Thank you for the read! I have fixed the typo. I hope I can do something with it, if not an animated short then maybe a children's book or something? Most animation studios only work internally with this kind of stuff from what I know but I could be wrong. Glad you enjoyed it!

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