He must have been VERY young (a fetus maybe) when his father died. That's as logical as I can get to this.

Reading this script, I was expecting a punchline at the end.  I'm kind of disappointed there wasn't.

The idea of using milk to bring someone back to life is pretty interesting.  And the way it was told seemd pretty good.  This is another script that, I think, would work better if it was longer.


Phil

Quoted from Don The writers are revealed: Milkman's Will by Helio J Cordeiro

Hey Helio, yours is the only one I guessed the author correctly on. I hope you take it as a compliment that so many people instantly recognize your work.

Brea

Okay, dudes, thanks a lot for taken your precious time readiding my insanities. I'll send the bill!

OMG, Helio... You've gone from freakishly morbid to humorously morbid. The idea of a man who believed he could get eternal life from milk is ok. Even the invocation from the will is ok, if not a bit silly. But the way it all plays out is...well...silly.

I really don't know what to say. We could have some story of his life, maybe a flashback of dad getting the info about the eternal life. It needed more to actually give it some legs to stand on.

It was funny as it is. I hope that was the intent.

"Hey Helio, yours is the only one I guessed the author correctly on. I hope you take it as a compliment that so many people instantly recognize your work.

Brea"

Hey Brea I accepet any comment (good or bad) always as a compliment, dear! Haha!

GW, nobody can take my stories seriously, I know that. I stay so happy and I'll gain my day if they take their time readding them and laugh a little.