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Posted: July 17th, 2022, 7:48pm Report to Moderator
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Night Call by Jack Coleman - Short, Horror - An Uber Eats drivers life is turned upside down during a mundane delivery. 17 pages - pdf format

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Here are my notes from page 1.
It doesn't look good so far regarding format and readability.

The story may be good, but it'll be hard to get past page 1 without cleaning things up a bit.

Page 1

-Jordan


Read my scripts here:
SOCIAL EXPERIMENT 8pg-Drama
THE BRIDGE 8pg-Horror
SCHEISSE 6pg-Horror/Comedy
MADE FOR EACH OTHER-FILMED

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