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Posted: January 22nd, 2023, 11:58am Report to Moderator
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The Antagonist by Brandi Self  - Short, Horror - An offbeat writer is put on trial for the murders of the characters in his new novel.  12 pages - pdf format

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Hey Brandi,

I just read your script and really enjoyed it. Very left field, and kind of kafkaesque, but I thought it worked well.

Only thing I noticed was a couple of “lets” that I think should have been “let’s” but that’s a really trivial issue… but it’s the only one I could think of though and felt like I should say something!

Good work, and good luck with it.

Cheers

Max


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Very cool story idea.  I love a circular Twilight Zone type of story, and this one totally qualifies.


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