Quoted Text Read the script and fell in love with it. Kinda reminded me of memento for some reason. I would love to read the new draft.

Aashiq, sorry for the delayed response. Thanks for the cudos. Memento is my all-time favorite movie. Brilliant.

I'll let you know when I have a new draft finished.

Best,
Joseph

Quoted from medstudent Ahhh. I forgot to address the body. The body has nothing to do with Rudy or Katie. It was just a female corpse who happened to have on the same dress. I need to add a scene in during the restaurant showing a girl with the same dress then add a closure scene with her getting murdered by her "John" or something.

Oh damn, I was convinced the body was planned. Wow, how did I do that?
It's supposed to be a random corpse with same dress?
If that's the case, that's a giant serving of plot convenience, my friend.
To me, that strains the strong credibility you've shown with your work to date.
Good luck with that conundrum, good sir.

Quoted from medstudent Again, great point. I think I need to substitute this fella with someone already within the story. Someone connected to the Detectives somehow. Someone Rudy meets but doesn't remember. I meant "hot" as in great ass hot. Vinadoo is a great stripper name.

Yeah, the last thing I want to say during the climax is, "Who's this guy?"
Vindaloo = outstanding prostitute moniker! <3