Mugged by 0 - Short, Comedy - Writing can be burdensome - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Meta af

4/5

Okay, I confess — I laughed.  Especially at the ending.  Good job here. And Steven’s right. Very meta.

Best of luck,
Gary

Ah - the bane of our existence.  Relevant for sure.

I don't git it. This is total fiction as a reel writer KNOWS that there werk rox!

Heh heh. Luv'd it.

Wasn't expecting that. Nice tongue in cheek story. Was quite funny, the 'goodest'. Made me laugh in places. This deserves to go a few rounds in the comp, if not win.

That was epic.

Got a laugh out of me! Loved it, especially the near end.

This one was certainly inspired!  Good job!

Mugged

I liked the irony and the overall direction isn't bad, (good fourth wall breaking regarding the brevity of the very short the viewer is actually watching that moment… kind of). But a real out of this challenge form would have been doable, and actually, I believe, be much more entertaining, even justify a production perhaps.
3

Captured me perfectly.

Well done.

Very good. I laughed just thinking about you guys.

That damn mug, one-day it will be mine!!!

Well written and a fun little story.

I'm 99.9% sure I know who wrote this.

Well done.

I didn't really want to like this because it uses an old device writers fall back on when they can't think of what write about. That is, write about not having anything to write about.
But, you turned it around for me. And everyone here can relate.

Very good! Haha. Reminds me of me lately.

I’ve read three or four of these so far, and not a lousy one in the bunch.

Good job, writer.

Steve