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Logline:  A sitcom about two homeless screwing up every chance to get off the street.  


Hi creative people  ,

I am a Brazilian Ghostwriter and filmmaker and now looking for some feedback of my fellows here to my new sitcom.

It's in the early stage so any feedback does help shape the style of the story which is about two guys trying to get off the street. Only problem - normality was never an option for these two.


LINK: https://bit.ly/3iODVV2

Please let me know if I can vice versa read something from you (not the whole script xD) to give my feedback.

I am part of this network for a while now and the value of it grew for me over the past years.

Let us help each other.

Cheers,

Pedro
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