Link to script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-Fl3HGJBk3oIOAa1BY4WHlYwG80vXPYn/view?usp=sharing

I would really appreciate feedback on this script.

Particularly on the following:

Is there enough subtext in my lines? (This is my first draft so I'm not expecting much but any suggestions regarding this would serve me well).

Does the ending makes sense?

As this is meant to be a chamber short - do I have one character too many or is my cast okay?

Are there any structural or confusing elements regarding the plot or characters?

Thank you for taking the time to give me feedback.

As for the subtext.You could try to heavily describe the character,and then let them do one action.This way it could be interpreted with different subtexts.
The ending I thought was o.k.
I liked three characters.You can't go wrong with the rule of three.The three characters felt natural in the interaction.
You might want to edit any unnecessary repetition,and show instead of stating .If you describe you might not need to state it. We'll get it.

Link to script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-Fl3HGJBk3oIOAa1BY4WHlYwG80vXPYn/view?usp=sharing
I would really appreciate feedback on this script as I've written a second draft.
Particularly on the following:
1. Is there enough subtext in my lines?
2. Does the ending makes sense? Does the main character's transformation seem out of the blue? If so , how can I change this?
3. How do I make my action lines less passive? I've tried removing all the instances of 'is' in my script? Is there anything else I can do?
4. Are there any structural or confusing elements regarding the plot or characters?
Thank you for taking the time to give me feedback.