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very nice job again like everyone else there isn't much to say about this script. It's short but has a nice little point. Good deeds don't go unoticed I don't know if that was your intention but that's what I got out of it. But yeah, very nice. 3 pages seems short but it goes to show that you can have a nice complete story of that length. Your descripts were broken up appropriately and it flowed nicely. an enjoyable read for my first short in this challenge -Matt
This was just really sweet. It brought tears to my eyes. I think if I had been watching it on television or something, it may have made me cry. Very well done. Very moving and effective in such a short span. This is only the second Valentine’s Day script I’ve been able to read but I can’t imagine a piece evoking so much emotion (and such a gamut of emotion -- I was moved to smile as well as almost cry) in such a short span.
Very moving. Now, this is what I like. Something to touch me and affect me. Great work.
Thanks once again for bringing one of my scripts back from the depths. In all honesty, I'm rather proud of this one. When the "contest" was first mentioned, I was a little nervous about the inability to use dialogue, given my habit of "talky" writing.
But, in the end, I sat down for a bit, thought it out, and came up wiith this. I think it's a nice piece, and I definitely overcame the no dialogue obstacle even if I did manage only 3 pages.
Thanks again for checking it out, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for referring me to this. Looking at your formatting has been helpful and I'm clear about what I need to do with my script now. It seems I just need to put spaces between the paragraphs, and single sentences, to make up for the lack of dialogue and scene headings.
As for this story, I thought it was well written and you crammed a fair bit into two and quarter pages. For the sake of making a suggestion, perhaps the people could be eating the chocolates at the cemetery, so it's like they're showing their old friend that they're still enjoying his generosity, however, your ending works well. I like the idea of them giving back to him.