Note: I'll be posting 10 scripts at a time every 24 hours.
Note: The names are pseudonyms.  These are NOT the names of the writers.  


The Flesh Won't Be Missed by Jack Ketch - Short - A witch and her psychotic boyfriend plan a robbery with the use of a very special candle.  - pdf, format

Territory by Alan Smithee - Short - Even killers should respect *certain* boundaries.... - pdf, format

Wisp by Harley G Wolfe Jr. (Hugh Hoyland) - Short - Don't follow the light. 8 pages - pdf, format



Scottish Lullaby by The Son of Barbara McDonald L. - Short - A peculiar boy becomes the focus of dark ambition and supernatural forces, as jealous gods reach from the past.  - pdf, format

Bell Tolls by William Calcraft - Short - A disabled woman uses her visions of the moments after people die to battle a Banshee that feeds on souls. - pdf, format

Them That's Dead by Thomas Pierrepoint - Short - The dark art of necromancy proves perilous for a cutthroat trio of thieves seeking lost treasure. - pdf, format

The Cries by Harry Bernard Allen - Short - An old man must save his granddaughter from the demon that took her mother twenty years earlier. - pdf, format

YES!!!!!  It made it...just kidding...maybe...

WOW, that's fast Donald.  You da Man!!

Congrats everyone!!  

Thanks for getting the first up so quickly Don! Much appreciated!

Just wanted to remind people that we usually don't start the guessing game for at least one week.  

Just a quick question, no hurry needed on the reply: should we at any point submit rewrites? Not so much a rewrite as a submission with corrected errors, such as spelling mistakes, punctuation, etc. Probably not fair to do this as the moderator has enough work. Just asking.

If you want to resubmit, wait until after the challenge is over.  Mistakes in the script are all part of the challenge.

Oh, and beware of mentioning spoilers in your reviews (this is for everyone).  If you need to mention story details in the reviews, include a little...


SPOILER SPACE



in your comments.

Phil

Quoted from dogglebe If you want to resubmit, wait until after the challenge is over.  Mistakes in the script are all part of the challenge. Oh, and beware of mentioning spoilers in your reviews (this is for everyone).  If you need to mention story details in the reviews, include a little... SPOILER SPACE in your comments. Phil

Must we really, Phil? Isn't it obvious. But if people think it's necessary, I will from here on in.

Sandra

Quoted from dogglebe If you want to resubmit, wait until after the challenge is over.

When I resubmit, it will be primarily for changing my aliases. But I also taking a few things under advisement and will weigh them in. I'd be sooo tempted to break rank and respond to some comments...

Quoted from DarrenJamesSeeley I'm soooo tempted to break rank and respond to some comments...

I agree that can be tough -- but frankly, even acknowledging that your script is amongst the 10 is kind of poor form.

I delete posts from authors who jump the gun, however, should I spot them.

Quoted from bert I delete posts from authors who jump the gun, however, should I spot them.

can you delete posts here? I thought it was only me.



Been waiting for years to say that.  

Quoted from DarrenJamesSeeley I'd be sooo tempted to break rank and respond to some comments...

So, you're saying Jeff has reviewed yours already????

James

Quoted from jwent6688 So, you're saying Jeff has reviewed yours already???? James

I decided to edit my above response and put in "If...I'd be.." or something to that effect. But rest assured, when one of my two does come up, I will respond when the time is right.

James, my man, I hope I haven't reviewed yours yet...right????

I'll try to be nicer going forward...

Quoted from Dreamscale I'll try to be nicer going forward...

Nooooo... !

We don't want the new and improved Jefffff!!!
We want Jeff Classic!.

Well, love him or hate him, it looks like you're getting the classic version.

I gotta be me...and I gotta be honest.  I don't mean to put anyone down or trash their scripts, but if I'm going to spend 30 minutes reading and writing feedback, I'm going to be telling ti like I see it.

Hooooraaaayyy!

I'll go start boiling the oil!