Hey John and Linda
Take a look at your log line when you have a chance. It could use some work. First of all, a couple plots. That could be a type O. But the rest is a mouthful too, very awkward. Nominees suffer meltdowns, "a" nominee suffers "a" meltdown. Just give it a moment, I think, I'm sure you can fix it up.
Good luck, the story sounds intriguing. |