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A Few Moments of Your Time, one of the entries in the May, 2010 One Week Challenge where the theme was "a vegan and and a carnivore argue over their dietary philosophies."
Ryan's entry, A Few Moments of Your Time was filmed. The script was removed at the film maker's request.
A census taker knocks on a man's door. What follows is an unexpected battle of wits.
Lol. I was munchin' on some of my son's leftover Vienna sausages while watching this and I had one of those 'What the hell am I doing eating this?' moments.
Congrats, Ryan.
Have you had any of your other stories filmed? I came across a short film called 'Still Life' on YouTube, and I remembered you had a story called that, but I don't think they were the same.
Oh yeah, and just to be clear so you don't think I'm a sicko, I only had the Vienna sausages that he didn't spit back out his mouth or weren't that chewed up.
I wonder if putting pork in the middle of the meatball actually works? The "cha-ching" noise at the sight of the money cracked me up. Was that bit actually in the script?
E.D.
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Good stuff, Ryan. This was very well produced and the acting was top notch. Got annoyed as hell with all the door bell ringing in the beginning, but now I see why the census guy just didn't piss off.
Fun trivia: the guy who plays the boss at the end was in Machete and The Ringer. Also a bunch of Walker Texas Ranger episodes.
Funny you should say that. As I watched when he came on, the film felt better or richer. I can't say exactly why, but that's how I felt. Maybe it's like reading a pro script versus a non pro script. I can't tell you exactly how I know it's a level above. I just know.
Funny you should say that. As I watched when he came on, the film felt better or richer. I can't say exactly why, but that's how I felt. Maybe it's like reading a pro script versus a non pro script. I can't tell you exactly how I know it's a level above. I just know.
I had the very same feeling! Guy's got PRESENCE. Big time.
I felt the same thing meeting this chap recently. We chatted at a recent Sherwood Oaks event. Naturally, we had a lot to discuss, starting with our similar monikers. He played President Kennedy in Watchmen and Transformers 3.
I had that same feeling when I saw the mob dude at the end here!
E.D.
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Yeah, the actors's name is Al Dias and he was also in the latest Spy Kids movie(guess he's a friend of Robert Rodriguez) and had a role in a now-cancelled tv show called The Good Guys.
I remember that script from the challenge but I couldn't recall what actually happened at the end of it; so I got a bit of a shock there near the end!!
Yeah, that food looked nice - I make a pretty decent meatball myself.
Congrats Ryan! Really enjoyed it. Just out of curiosity - how did you get this produced? Did you approach the director? Did you know him already? I've never been involved in a short so how these projects come to fruition is all new to me...