I'm going to hold back most of my in-depth comments for now, until you make an appearance.
What I will say is, this... I did like this. I appreciate what you were going for with the story. It's a sensitive topic and I thought you handled it without too many graphic scenes. You didn't overkill the rape parts.
The writing needs quite a bit of work. It's way overwritten in some places. As for the dialogue, good. You seem to have a clear understanding of how conversations work and you managed to avoid awkward lines.
I have more, but I'll share if/when you make an appearance on the boards. Just send a pm