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No, these people don't turn off drips, but this guy is a bit desperate, and when he finds the criminal, well, he can't resist. But murder is still murder, so he gets his just reward also. OBEs produce some fascinating possibilities. Thanks for reading.
Errors in the logline. - A hospice desperately wishes to learn if there is life after death, and he gets his wish.
I imagine a word or two is missing! A simple enough mistake but a mistake in the logline could and does stop people reading any further, especially those in the industry who read hundreds of scripts.
As it was I read the rest and found it very interesting. SPOILERS - You didn't do enough to convince me Rickert could get away with killing patients, nor did I buy he would be doing this simply because he read something online about dying patients sharing out of body experiences. With a bit of work though, this could be more convincing as the sentiment and desperation does come across. Overall I liked the idea and even though I guessed how it would end it still seemed the right way to go.
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