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Don
Posted: August 21st, 2018, 2:09pm Report to Moderator
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American Cars by F.J. Hubert - Drama, Romance - When lightning strikes between Peter Smith and the woman he's competing against to become CEO, he must face his lifetime fear of abandonment as the ultimate leadership test.  95 pages - pdf format

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Is it possible to share more of a synopsis of the story?

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Hi Y5 films, for future reference, you can actually add a synopsis under 'Optional Information' when first submitting your script.

Alternatively, feel free to post a link on this thread via Dropbox, Google Docs etc. with your synopsis. Or, just post it here if not too lengthy.

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You can contact the writer directly. The contact information is on the cover page of the script right here American Cars


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Quoted from Grandma Bear
You can contact the writer directly. The contact information is on the cover page of the script right here American Cars

Okay, I obviously misinterpreted the request.  



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Dear F.J. Hubert,
there's certainly retro imagination displayed here alongside the majestic shapes, sounds and reminiscences of American cars, music and vintage media. Bonus points for citing Vanishing Point!! I felt the competition was somewhat harsh - a bit like the film The Game - so wouldn't the candidates expect underhandedness?
Peter has prooved he's not top material by his actions at the end?
Your thesis is about grit and determination so the fact that Bonnie wins for me was wrong.
Your action shots are very detailed - the ball game would be 5 mins of screen time and is a great (Slowing) chunk to read.
For me the most intriguing action para (and the best written) is the final one.
All best - JtF
PS My fav Time cover is 6th March 1978
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