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Don
Posted: September 14th, 2018, 5:23pm
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So, what are you writing?
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CandyCellers by Benin Trotter - Drama, Family Drama, Gangster - Where "The Pursuit of Happyness" meets "American Gangster". Late 70's Portland is brought to life by a Black female, ex-con, Harrie, who resorts to selling candy as she struggles with the system and ex, Big Dee, for custody of their son, P'nut. 119 pages
Contests: Diverse Voices (Fall 201
Semifinalist; Dark Matter Media (Fall 201
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ChrisV
Posted: September 21st, 2018, 12:26pm
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I'm no expert and waiting for my first script to post. I read the first six pages and noticed spelling errors. I get the dialogue uses a lot of slang, but I feel the ACTION LINES should use proper grammar/spelling. As I said, I'm no expert and still finding grammar and spelling issues even after going over my script 3-4 times.
ALSO...if you're using Amazon's free Story Writer, I've noticed after I corrected errors, I go back and the original errors reappear days later. >
GOOD LUCK!
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eldave1
Posted: September 21st, 2018, 3:27pm
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Don't do this:
Quoted Text
EXT. WOMEN’S CORRECTIONAL FACILITY - SALEM, OREGON - NIGHT
(SUMMER 197
.
Douglas firs dominate a moist daisy-chain of illumination
encircling barbed security fences and rain-streaked
barracks.
Do this:
EXT. WOMEN’S CORRECTIONAL FACILITY - NIGHT
Douglas firs dominate a moist daisy-chain of illumination
encircling barbed security fences and rain-streaked
barracks.
SUPER: SALEM, OREGON - SUMMER, 1978
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Benin
Posted: November 26th, 2018, 6:36pm
Good suggestions. Made some corrections. Thank you
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eldave1
Posted: November 26th, 2018, 6:43pm
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Good suggestions. Made some corrections. Thank you
My pleasure
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