The Chuck Spunt Experience: No Stop at the Bus Stop by John Stone - Short, Comedy - No Stop at the Bus Stop. More woes for Chuck Spunt esq. 3 pages - pdf format

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John, regardless of the script content, all I can see in my mind now is your description of Chuck Spunt as a mix of Mr. Magoo and Donald Trump. That alone keeps me laughing at his antics. Keep ‘em coming!  ðŸ˜‚

Hahaha

I have read so many of these that I know exactly who (or what) is behind Chuck eating the cheeseburger. I feel a bonding to the series being in on an inside joke. I consider that to be a creative approach to comedy. It's a great way to establish a cult following.

I have more Chuck pictures to send you. I'll send them tomorrow.

Michael please tell me what you think the cheeseburger idea stems from and I will confirm if you are right. The inside joke is also fascinating, but you might need to use psychology to work that one out. Ha! I look forward to some new images though.

If this script offends anyone please let me know and I will have it removed.  It is not my intention to cause offence to anyone who deems this as politically incorrect. The hoodie and the gorilla joke stems from a previous sketch which took place in a burger bar which left Chuck traumatised.