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Posted: April 25th, 2005, 10:53am Report to Moderator
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Mark Of The Loser by Brett S. Harrison - Comedy - When an Arrogant CEO is suddenly branded as a Loser, he must follow the advice of a sassy Fortune Teller to regain his status, woo a Beautiful Med Student, and overcome his fears -- before he loses everything forever. - pdf, format


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This was okay nothing too great but was funny at times sometimes a little slow but it made me laugh! keep it up it was FUNNY! but the wooing the beautiful med student is a little lame its been done alot!! but it was funny so KEEP IT UP!


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Good story, nothing over the top but defintely something different. You might want to drop "woo a beautiful med student" from your log line; it doesn't seem to fit with the rest of it. Obviously it works well in the story, though.


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