Users Browsing Forum
No Members and 1 Guests
Pages: 1
Author
The President's unexplained visit... (currently 2865 views)
Don
Posted: October 13th, 2005, 12:11pm
Administrator Administrator
So, what are you writing?
Location Virginia
Posts 17080
Posts Per Day 1.93
The President's unexplained visit to the trailer park by Daniel J. Toemta (Alfred Hitchcock) - Comedy - Three stories that takes place in a trailer park. For some reason the President of the united states is out for a drive in the countryside. He finally arrives at a trailer park. Alex has just gotten back from his vacation but when he comes back he finds out he has been robbed. And three adolescents who are trying to make a documentary about birds. - rtf, format
Visit SimplyScripts.com for what is new on the site. ------------- You will miss 100% of the shots you don't take. - Wayne Gretzky
Alfred Hitchcock
Posted: October 13th, 2005, 1:03pm
New
Drama is life with the dull bits left out.
Location Norway
Posts 208
Posts Per Day 0.03
Hello. I'm the writer of The Presidents unexplained visit to the trailer park. This is my first script here at Simplyscripts. I got the idea for it one night when i was watching Seinfeld and i wrote out the rough draft in like 5 hours. I hope you enjoyed reading it and i'm looking forward to hearing what you thought of it.
When things go wrong I seem to be bad But I'm just a soul whose intentions are good Oh Lord, please don't let me be misunderstood
Revision History (3 edits; 1 reasons shown)
Reply: 1 - 8
MidnightGiant
Posted: October 17th, 2005, 12:13am
New
Posts 19
Posts Per Day 0.00
Whaaaaaat the hell was that all about? The only thing that was funny as the last job. Pretty good way to end it. Considering nothing else made sense or was funny. Sorry to be harsh.. but meh.
Reply: 2 - 8
Alfred Hitchcock
Posted: November 20th, 2005, 1:08am
New
Drama is life with the dull bits left out.
Location Norway
Posts 208
Posts Per Day 0.03
Really? Nothing else was at least a bit funny?
When things go wrong I seem to be bad But I'm just a soul whose intentions are good Oh Lord, please don't let me be misunderstood
Reply: 3 - 8
-Ben-
Posted: November 20th, 2005, 3:11am
New
Stop reading this and look above!
Location Nunya
Posts 396
Posts Per Day 0.06
I might read it...but im kinda not really wanting too, since you couldn't bother to type the title in with caps of reach ne wword....duh!
Logged
Reply: 4 - 8
Alfred Hitchcock
Posted: December 1st, 2005, 8:26pm
New
Drama is life with the dull bits left out.
Location Norway
Posts 208
Posts Per Day 0.03
man what a let down. this was practicly the first script i ever finished into a final format and no one is even replying.
When things go wrong I seem to be bad But I'm just a soul whose intentions are good Oh Lord, please don't let me be misunderstood
Reply: 5 - 8
bert
Posted: December 1st, 2005, 9:23pm
Administrator Buy the ticket, take the ride
Location That's me in the corner
Posts 4247
Posts Per Day 0.58
How many scripts have you read and commented on, Hitch? It's a two-way street.
Hey, it's my tiny, little
IMDb!
Logged
Reply: 6 - 8
dogglebe
Posted: December 1st, 2005, 11:01pm
Guest User
I might read it...but im kinda not really wanting too, since you couldn't bother to type the title in with caps of reach ne wword....duh!
I'm going to have to avoid reading anything you write because you seem so illiterate when you post.
Phil
Logged
Reply: 7 - 8
Alfred Hitchcock
Posted: December 1st, 2005, 11:27pm
New
Drama is life with the dull bits left out.
Location Norway
Posts 208
Posts Per Day 0.03
How many scripts have you read and commented on, Hitch? It's a two-way street.
one. i really should read some more.
When things go wrong I seem to be bad But I'm just a soul whose intentions are good Oh Lord, please don't let me be misunderstood
Reply: 8 - 8
Pages: 1
Locked Board
Board Index Comedy Scripts [ previous | next ]
Switch to:
News Questions or Comments Site Redesign Screenwriting Class Simplyscripts Collaborative Effort Review My Logline Script Review Exchange My Work In Progress Contests - Screenwriting and Filmmaking Writing Opportunities and Call for Scripts The January Project '21 The Business Of Scripts Queries and Pitches Options and Contracts Agents, Managers, and Lawyers Copyright Action/Adventure Scripts Comedy Scripts Drama Scripts Dramedy Scripts Family Scripts Horror Scripts Romantic Comedy Sci Fi and Fantasy Scripts Series Thriller Scripts Western Scripts Short Scripts Short Action / Adventure Scripts Short Comedy Scripts Short Drama Scripts Short Dramedy Scripts Short Horror Short Romantic Comedy Scripts Short Sci Fi and Fantasy Scripts Short Family Scripts Short Thriller Scripts Short Western Radio and Stage Plays 2Q '25 One Week Challenge 1Q '25 OWC December '24 Quickie Challenge Halloween 2024 One Week Challenge 3Q '24 OWC 2Q '24 OWC 1Q '24 OWC Halloween 2023 One Week Challenge September '23 OWC August '23 OWC July 2023 OwC April '23 OWC A 'Quickie' Challenge Halloween 2022 One Week Challenge Summer Quickie April 2022 OWC One Queue Twenty-Two The Placeholder 2021 Challenge December 2021 One Week Challenge November, 2021 OWC The Halloween 2021 One Week Challenge The September 2021 OWC The August 2021 OWC The July, 2021 OWC The June 2021 Challenge The April 2021 Challenge February, 2021 One Week Challenge December 2020 One Week Challenge Halloween 2020 One Week Challenge September, 2020 One Week Challenge June, 2020 One Week Challenge May, 2020 Challenge March Challenge January 2020 - One Week Challenge October, 2019 One Week Challenge The August Challenge April, 2019 One Week Challenge January 2019 - One Week Challenge The Night Gallery 7 Week Challenge October 2018 One Week Challenge July 2018 One Week Challenge May 2018 One Week Challenge January 2018 Two Week Challenge October 2017 One Week Challenge The Quickie Challenge July 2017 OWC April 2017 OWC Scarefest Script Club January 2017 One Week Challenge October 2K16 One Week Challenge August 2016 One Week Challenge April 2016 OWC January 2016 OWC October 2015 One Week Challenge 2015 7 Week Challenge May, 2015 One Week Challenge February 2015 One Week Challenge October 2014 One Week Challenge 2014 One + 6 Week Challenge April 2014 One Week Challange January 2014 - One Week Challenge October 2013 One Week Challenge July 2013 One Week Challenge March, 2013 1+6WC End of the World One Week Challenge October 2012 One Week Challenge February 2012 OWC December, 2011 Urban Legend OWC October, 2011 One Week Challange September 2011 One Week Challenge June 2011 One Week Challenge February 2011 One Week Challenge October, 2010 One Week Challenge May 2010 One Week Challenge February, 2010 One Week Challenge October, 2009 One Week Challenge August 2009 One Week Challenge April, 2009 One Week Challenge January, 2009 Two Week Challenge October, 2008 One Week Challenge July 08 One Week Challenge February, 2008 One Week Challenge October '07 One Week Challenge Short Sci Fi - January 07 One Week Challenge July/August 2007 One Week Challenge Short Comedy - April '07 One Week Challenge Short Horror - October 06 One Week Challenge The 2025 Writers' Tournament The 2021 Writers Tournament The 2020 Writers' Tournament The 2019 Writers' Tournament The 2018 Writers' Tournament Movie, Television and DVD Reviews Script Reviews Music Reviews and Discussion General Chat Movie/Television Rumor Books Poetry Getting to know you, getting to know all about you... Things you are looking for March Madness 2018 Stephen King - All about the King Fiction: There Are Other Worlds than These Non-Fiction - To Write is Human, to Edit is Divine Adaptations - Here's Johnny! Stephen King Collectors and Shelfies
Forum Rules
You may not post new threads You may not post replies You may not post polls You may not post attachments
HTML is on Blah Code is on Smilies are on