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Hello I thought I need to write this, but didn't really know where. This is my first OWC and I am very grateful to everyone for posting feedback. I tried writing some feedback for several scripts, but quickly realized that the level of writers over here is way above mine, since I write for only six months or so There was not much I could really contribute. I enjoyed reading them all, though. There is always something to learn.
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Hey people, if you would like to join some of us on Skype for an impromptu Simply Radio show to discuss this OWC or anything else for that matter please go on Skype and look up either me "swampmistress" or "cornetto.Michael".
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Hey people, if you would like to join some of us on Skype for an impromptu Simply Radio show to discuss this OWC or anything else for that matter please go on Skype and look up either me "swampmistress" or "cornetto.Michael".
C'mon! It could be fun discussing the last week's scripts!!
Name the time, Pia. I'll addd Michael to my contact list.
My three faves in no particular order. May I state that I've judged this on the feature challenge that it original was before shorts was later introduced.
Secret War: This one has huge potential for me, it’s not original by any means but the Nazi’s always make a great antag and although I think it was a wrongly placed scene for a feature, the ending made me want more.
Pagan Man: This one set up the best protag for me, even though I felt he should have had more to do in the first 10 pages. I liked him and wanted to follow his story and the potential of Gus at the wicca commune has so many comedic opportunities.
Hellfire: A good concept with some excellent action in the first 10 pages, I mean you can’t beat that action scene in the toilet with a fart gag in the middle. Lots of potential to go further and also like the witches using modern technology which I felt was a nice touch.
Honourable mentions.
Of Mice and Monsters: Writing wise, this was my favourite as I liked the technique here. Also felt it was a strong story but I couldn’t see it as a feature, more of an excellent short to be honest.
Dry Spell: Again, didn’t think this had the legs for a feature but I truly hope the author gives it a go. This was the kind of comedy I enjoy and I did love the dialogue throughout. I mean, turning someone into a turd was brilliant.
Wicca Patrol: Though it needs a lot of work in the writing department. I just found this very enjoyable with some really funny action going on.
Well done to everyone who participated.
P.S Also a big thank you to Jeff and Kevin for mentioning my short in their recent conversation. I didn’t even pay them an advertisement fee.
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I thought I need to write this, but didn't really know where. This is my first OWC and I am very grateful to everyone for posting feedback. I tried writing some feedback for several scripts, but quickly realized that the level of writers over here is way above mine, since I write for only six months or so 
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