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DOM
Posted: September 11th, 2006, 2:19pm Report to Moderator
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Oh, right. If you want, I'll get right on it.
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sweet, and perhaps, if you read jackelope, one for that as well would be most appreciated, and would ensure better scripts in the future.


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DOM
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Okay, if it helps you.
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Pro's
Funny script.
Good Writing.
great idea.




Con's
while funny, could be funnier.
Ending felt rushed.
Having him get killed felt like the easy out, even with the gag at the end.
format off.


Verdict: It was a fun script, and quite interesting. decent way to kill off a few minutes.
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