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Don
Posted: March 19th, 2005, 9:44am Report to Moderator
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So, what are you writing?

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Wrath of God by Lonnie Turner - Horror, Psychological Thriller - William Athman steps outside his home on Christmas Day, grabs an axe from the chopping block, strolls back inside and murders his entire family.  What could make a man do something like this?  That's what psychiatrist Timothy Vick intends to find out when he's requested by the murderer himself to take his confession.  But when Athman claims he was forced by God to kill his family, Tim must struggle with his own beliefs (or lack thereof) in order to stop the next person to kill in God's name -- himself. 90 pages - pdf, format


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i really liked this story.  it really had me thinking the whole time "was this guy lieing or telling the truth?"  and when i finally thought i had my answer, it switched in a totally different direction.

keep up the good work.
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Thanks, quadmanjt.  The point of the story was to leave it up to the reader/viewer to come to their own conclusion, and I'm glad you liked it.  I'll be starting the whole rewriting process here in the next couple weeks and will likely submit a final draft to simply scripts by then.

Thanks again!

-Lon
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that's a really good concept.  to let the reader/viewer come to their own conclusions about what really happened and what they believe.

very nice.
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I've only read a couple scripts here, but boy, is this something. Definitely a good read.
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I think this is next years WALTERS nominee material


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pretty much any kevin smith flick or movie with Adam Sandler.
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What's a WALTER?
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like an OSCAR only for us here at simplyscripts


FAVORITE MOVIES:
1. Clerks
2. Mallrats
3. Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind
4. Napoleon Dynamite
5. American Beauty
6. Spanglish
pretty much any kevin smith flick or movie with Adam Sandler.
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Lon
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Ahhh...COOL.

-Lon
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Lonnie and I are entering this little ditty in the Shriekfest script competition this year. Wish us luck.
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The script's now been given another polish and I'm really, truly proud of it.  We've been getting LOTS of excellent feedback from various indie actors, and that's based on the script as it was two drafts ago.

Of course, I'm liable to go broke if I keep registering each draft with the WGAw, but, what the hell...you only live once.

Wish LRM and me luck as we submit the script to Shriekfest!

-Lon
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Balt
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I liked the concept. It was fresh and new and innovative, really. I dug it a great deal and feel like this is what it's all about, this is the kinda screenplay I want to go see on the big screen or own on dvd.

You nailed this one down!

Balt~
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Lon
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Very cool of you to say so, Balt.  Hopefully one day you WILL see it on the bigscreen.


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Wrath of God is now an official entry into the Screenplay competition at this year's Shriekfest Film Festival.  Wish us luck!

- Lon
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that's great to hear.  i hope you do great.
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