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This was something I wrote on a whim in an afternoon. I had no expectations for it. I found it depressing myself, but sometimes stories just want to be told. It didn't take long after it was posted here before I was contacted by two different filmmakers. I let the one that first contacted me to use it. They wrapped this week and hope to have it completed next month.
Several things were changed, but It still looks good and I'm looking forward to see what the final film looks like.
Not sure this one has a powerful message. More like a scary thing that could happen. And, you're right, I might not have been crazy about the story, but apparently it was something they were looking for. It was shot in Queens, NY. I believe the filmmaker is using it to put together a showreel for him as a director.
Thanks Dena! It was just one of those things I wrote in between real stuff. I honestly never thought anyone would be interested in it since it's kind of a depressing piece, IMO. Turned out great though.
Btw, this director is looking for more shorts to shoot. If any of you think he did a great job and have something that fits this, Action, Drama character emotions, or some type of story that has a valuable message at the end, hit me up.
Again, the director is asking for more scripts. If you have something you think might fit this director, hit me up. He's also interested in making this particular story into several sequels. I'm not sure I have time for that, but I'd be totally willing letting someone else take over.