Yeah, I think it was Libby. If so, great job!

Really want to find out the writer of Puta Grasa. Loved that one.

Glenn's right, I think we need to take a stab at Puta Grasa now...

I wrote that one too.  

Any takers for Starving Sea?

Quoted from khamanna I haven't read it but from the conversation here I see that LC wrote it.

Eh? I thought she was having a laugh.

She didn't write it. At least I don't think she did. As I'm not actually sure what we're talking about.

R

I wrote the one that's so amazing, Dreamscale couldn't even bring himself to comment on it.

I don't think that makes you unique Mark. Perhaps you might call yourself lucky in fact.  

Mine's the one so flippin out of this world awesome, literally nobody is talking about it.

You're welcome.

I have no idea who wrote Puta Grasa, but it has that air of authenticity that only the top writers manage.

It's either very well researched, or more likely it's written by someone who has spent a lot of time in those sort of circles. Maybe someone who used to work as a rent boy, or something like that.

Haha.


Top story.

I know that mine is safely and snuggly in the middle of the pack.

Decent feedback - thanks to all who gave it - and I practised the things I wanted to practice, so that's good. The WAY I wrote it seems to have been a bit divisive, however, with some people digging it and others really saying it was massively overblown. So not quite sure what conclusion to draw from that.

EDIT: My vote went to Puta Grasa, for what's it worth. A handful of considers, too.

My recommends went to both Brain and Phantoms Song. Both had a very dramatic, or human, feel to them. Especially Brain, which was very visual in its tone and setting, but with a glimmer of hope at the end. Phantom was good because of its unwillingness to end on a happy note.

Steve

Quoted from Scar Tissue Films Maybe someone who used to work as a rent boy, or something like that.

Sounds like I voted for Jeff's after all then. Pity that.

I think Puta Grasa is EWalls.

Ok, stop pressuring me - I'm going to read Phantom, so stop with all the yelling!!

Quoted from DustinBowcot Sounds like I voted for Jeff's after all then. Pity that.

You really should have voted for your own, Dusty.  That way, you would have received your first vote ever.  Maybe next time, little chap.

Quoted from Dreamscale You really should have voted for your own, Dusty.  That way, you would have received your first vote ever.  Maybe next time, little chap.

I did vote for my own this time around. After listening to what Don said, I decided that he was right. I honestly believe, no matter what anyone else thinks, that my story is worthy of top five and a recommendation, so I gave it a crafty vote.

If anyone wants to know what I wrote, it was, Ken. The true story about the blow up doll.

First time on OWC and have been hanging around the site reading different things.  I will say someone (and I won't point any fingers) deleted there comments from under my script.  I'm working my way through and I got a little burned out and my reviews were becoming one note. Just letting whoever did know that it was slightly premature as I would have made it to your script eventually.