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Posted: November 6th, 2015, 1:55pm Report to Moderator
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I really enjoyed the pace and tone and the ending.  The reveal was superb.  I don't think it was overwritten as some were claiming.  It was a nice amount of description to visualize what was happening.  There were some typos but that was to be expected.  Great one!
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My favourite won, yay! Considering my own script got bashed really badly, probably I'm better at reading than at writing

Congrats, Richard!


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Horror? It's not, but I don't care. A lot of food for thoughts in there, certainly. Loved all the revelations on the way, never had a chance to get bored while reading it. I understand you're the winner of the competition, congrats!


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Creepy is an understatement...
Terrific story idea with that really bizarre twist.
Never saw it coming. Always a great feeling.  
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I didn't get to enter this, but, I wanted to read a few anyways.  This was good.  Intense.  

I think you could have carried it further with what she is, and what she's taken.  And the contrast to the opening scene of him singing to a packed house to showing that they aren't real.

Nice job...


Please read my scripts:
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I'm interested in reading animation, horror, sci fy, suspense, fantasy, and anything that is good.  I enjoy writing the same.  Looking to team with anyone!

Thanks
Dan
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