Hey writer,

Really enjoyed this. Was an easy read, very visual and loads of fun.

Was a bit confused by the need to have Becky there as a kind of honeytrap though. Was it so that she could kill her husband and claim it was a crime of passion or something? Is that even a thing? I dunno, enjoyed it nonetheless.


Good luck!

This was a good read, a bit predictable with Becky being an accomplice, but still works.

I think it would work better to have that cabin as the main reason for the killing of Travis, rather than just his cheating. I'd make Becky and Amber cousins or some sort of family relation. Perhaps Travis is not only unfsithful but trying to take ownership of the cabin away from Amber. This would then cause Amber to make up a plan with Becky to confirm her suspicions.



Good work.

Good story. Good ending. However, some of the dialogue seemed a bit off at times. Also some typos made me have to check myself. No FADE IN is lazy and careless.