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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    One Week Challenge    August 2016 One Week Challenge  ›  A.M.A. - OWC
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grademan
Posted: August 23rd, 2016, 4:34pm Report to Moderator
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AMA. Not bad. Several small points. If the title is A.M.A. the character should be introduced as A.M.A. Garry weeps a bit early/easily. Moral Agent  is an unlikely moniker. Other than those nits, this was pretty good. I wonder how a police version of A.M.A. would handle a similar situation?
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Posted: August 27th, 2016, 6:34pm Report to Moderator
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Congrats on the win, was a really great script.


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Yep. Congratulations. Very nice script.


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Eric,
    Very nice job.  This was one of my fav stories too.  I had 3 at the top.  It was a solid story  and it kept me guessing.  

I hope you rewrite it and make it perfect.  It's a solid story.  I'd like to see you have the car rationalize that killing him is worth it somehow.  Other then that, really good effort.

Dan


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Eric, I have emailed you using the address provided but it keeps saying it been delayed. I'm not sure if the problem is at my end or yours so I'm not sure if you have received my email or not.

Please could you contact me at peter.mcmullan@nrc.ac.uk about getting permission to adapt and use this script in a short film?

Thanks

Peter McMullan
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